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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-19 02:20 PM

Red tinting yellow
tinting you

Breeze screaming low
screaming through

Late Autumn and feeling fun
Red in the face feeling young

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-19 02:34 PM

*smile*
oh i remember my youth and autumn and all the lovely itchy leaves dad raked up into a pile! **bombs away!!**

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-01-19 02:34 PM

Dave,
  Enjoyed.  This is expressed so well, with
few words, leaving the  reader much room to gather interpretations and memories.  Loved it.

                    ~Sadelite~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-19 03:02 PM

Thanks

I like late Autumn myself

Interesting that some people hate winter yet to me it is an essential part of life

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-01-19 04:19 PM

beautiful and colorful, being an artist...I love vivid colors and your poem was full of vision~

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2004-01-19 05:33 PM

Wow, Dave...love it! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-01-19 06:11 PM

beautiful and colorful, being an artist...I love vivid colors and your poem was full of vision~

Thanks - I did start to write Vision before I read your words - I doubt of course that anyone would believe me - but even if I had read them I enjoy your work

Sadelite and Muted I am appreciated of your comments

JC - you are too kind

Dave

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

7 posted 2004-01-19 08:09 PM

very danty
and sweet, 'i dig the flow

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2004-01-20 06:38 AM

Nice compaction of thoughts and words, yet the scene is still vivid and clear....
enjoyed
_________ice
><>

nn
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

9 posted 2004-01-20 07:05 AM

It gives a nice feeling

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