Open Poetry #30 |
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Winter Meal---for the use of simile |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Winter Meal junco like a bobble-head rhythmically dips from an earth-shaking hunger pecking seeds as a toothpick-bird not getting any younger winter is a time to search for his inanimate prey I wonder how much he’ll eat by the end of day starling waits upon the eave for what he might espy hungry as a bear in spring he flits as junco flies ©January 19, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Loved the descriptiveness. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting format...great theme! |
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