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In the Rocking Chair (twenty words or less)
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In the Rocking Chair (twenty words or less) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Soft creeking flow rythyms gentle rocking; A quenching lullaby; ‘Cross her lap battles rest. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, C.! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, Glad you liked it. I was thinking about those far away... ~Sadelite~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadelite The rhythm of rocking and laps....a place of peace and for gathering strength. I enjoyed this! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Martie, And I enjoy the sensitivity of your writing... Thank you for your sweet comment. ~Sadelite~ |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
Very fine intresting short poem which I liked a lot, well writern. take care Richard. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very deep, very, very deep You could write your own dreams reading it Dave |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Richard, Thank you for your interest in this little ditty. It came to me about 4:00 am. in the dark, hoping that I could read it in the morning! Glad you like, Richard. ~Sadelite~ Dave, Yes, you are right. It is fairly deep with subtle play on words. Glad you enjoyed. Write all the dreams you like... Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweeeeet! |
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