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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
~Father~ I look at you into your dark brown eyes, and phisically i see me. I look exactly like you, but that you do not see! Everytime i visit, you act like i'm not there. You dont realize how much it hurts, to think that you don't care. There's four of us, but you only see three. I was your big mistake in life, I wasn't meant to be. To you i'm just a burden, A pain in the back. You have never been there, In my times of need. Sometimes you hurt me so bad, I make myself bleed! I wish that you could see, the pain you inflict me, I wonder if you'd care?!? The answer to this question, scares me indeed, Thats why this poem, you will never read! |
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pammy Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50California |
this is a great poem. I can tell you were hurting when you wrote this and i am sorry. I truely hope that things will get better for you and please keep writing you are very talented [This message has been edited by pammy (11-27-2003 11:27 PM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is such a sad post, I will keep you in thoughts and prayers that life will be filled with more peace..... Welcome to Passions, We are glad you have joined our family.... please check your email for a special greeting Greeneyes~ I had a dream last night |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hope you find a way some day to walk away from all this hurt and understand that you are special. It hurts when you feel invisible. Welcome to Pips, where you need not feel invisible. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This echoes deep for me. Just know in the end it's you that has the value, because you could see. You are the one that has eyes to see, and ears to hear...compassion that is. My heart goes out to you, because I know so much about this. If you'd ever like someone to talk to that's a person that's not an involved party feel free to click on the email icon, and write me. If not know that my heart is with you, and my thoughts, and prayers are there for you. This really touches me. Gold Bless, and keep you in every step.  Love, Terri~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think many of us can understand this. Welcome to Passions!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 By Ethel_GG_Kent [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-28-2003 11:57 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big angel hugs) Oh Carissa, it saddens me to read this aching debut and the tears here, sweet friend, no child should ever be neglected like this as all children are special and should be loved and my heart sends many angel hugs and prayers your way, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Carissa, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carissa, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Thank you, all of you. I really appreciate everything, especially right now. I hope to have more poems posted soon. Thank you guys for your words of encouragement also. They really help. ~kissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Kissa~ Such a lovely name you have~ WELCOME to Passions~  Hoping you will release more of your emotions through your poetry ... it is a good outlet among friends of this poetic circle~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've written many that certain people will never see...but they spoke to my heart...because they were from my heart...James |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Thanx, but kissa is just my nickname!My real name is carissa. All of my freinds call me kissa, because they heard my little sister call me kissa one time, and it just sorta stuck with me! ~kissa~ |
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