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Autumn Drifts
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Autumn Drifts |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Autumn Drifts they gently fall like snowflake down those autumn leaves of tawny gold there seems to be no tree at hand yet their color is well tolled they waft upon the breeze, you see they flit and float and fly bringing ‘round a dream so sweet of autumn’s wane to dry one might think this season is a time to die or sleep yet waiting on the ground they rest till spring and winsome creep oh, Carpet Gold, lie still, lie still, paint the earth your lovely hue for winter’s rest was made for you to feed next spring’s request ©October 28, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
VAS, Beautiful. It flows so sweetly. Margot |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
WOW!!! This is fabulous! I love the flow through the whole thing. It's a keeper! ~K~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful and I love the rhythm of it. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely indeed. Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
yet waiting on the ground they rest till spring and winsome creep That's so pretty.... Truly, a beautiful, hopeful poem VAS~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
VAS -- nice imagery and message! BEEEEEwell. |
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