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There are Two Ways...
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There are Two Ways... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Some words belong only to the tongue. Yet there is another language that is spoken by the silent trace of our caress. There are two ways that we may listen. One is with ears that strain to capture what is fleeting to the senses. The other...is the rise of flesh to meet the passing mood of our pleasure. Listen as words fall helpless from my tongue. And listen...closer still as my fingers whisper slowly through the night. Then...whisper something slowly in return. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Listen as words fall helpless from my tongue. And listen...closer still as my fingers whisper slowly through the night. Then...whisper something slowly in return." Absolutely exquisite Eric! So softly sensual. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
Very nice  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There are two ways .... yes and dear Eric you are a true Master in conveying the depth of meaning of both ways. Wonderfully inspiring. I love you. Margherita |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
Wow, I love this poem! Especially the ending!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Warm, very, very warm...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is beautifully romantic, sweet friend, when the door of the heart opens there are infinite ways then to express, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dearest One... Yes, there are two ways to listen and many more ways to say "thank you"...but, not nearly enough room in this limited reality! You ARE the whisper...the softly sensual voice that sings us to sleep at night and gently awakes us with the morning's light. You are the creator of love songs that see the essence of the Beloved in each of us...and, you share that beauty with a clarity that can only be found at the center of a heart that is pure and true and magical. You are wondrous, dear One. Simply thank you for the gift of you... Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hear you and I love the music |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
What an invitation! VaVaVoom! Congratulations on an awe-inspiring topic and display! McLean |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am.......Whispering can you hear me? ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ You just get better and better ...~ This is so YOU ... thank you for sharing with me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful, you write romance well.... ~*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Eric, This was good! I also liked the title and the form you put it in. Much enjoyed... Sadelite |
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