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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-11-27 09:55 PM

At the heart of moonlit fields
Turn by turn of fond ideals
Be you rain, my spirit thunder
Standing at the edge of wonder
Sight unseen from passions camp
Flame by flame eternal lamp
To shine a light of love ahead
Be you doubt, my spirit red
Listened through a language of
Be you lion, find me dove
Be you hungry, shared and fed
Of my arms, my soul, my bed
In my thirst your kisses wine
Be you lonely two entwine
In the ageless hands are held
Parched to trickle, rivers swelled
Be you strong my heart is clear
Ever long both far and near
At the heart of moonlit fields
We command what burns and yields

Copyright Kkh 11/27/03

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-11-27 10:15 PM

Simply put, a star filled write
such a gem,  of brightest light
Polished hue,  of crystal gleam
radiantly,  a woman's dream.

Love this one K.  excellent flow based on
7 per line...like it..

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-11-28 04:01 PM

Great meter and imagery, I really enjoyed this one.

Jason

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-28 04:03 PM

Beautifully written Kathleen...
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides ~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2003-11-28 08:22 PM

"At the heart of moonlit fields
We command what burns and yields"

Really enjoyed the flow of this TD and loved the strong ending lines.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-11-28 09:13 PM

Kathleen, oh my, you have out done yourself with this beautiful poem. Outstanding...and that last line...I know that will come to my mind often from now to eternity.

Still shaking my head in awe.

Patricia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-29 05:21 AM

awesome!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-11-29 10:50 AM

Excellent and beautiful writing!

Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-11-29 11:22 AM

Exquisite! Just outstandingly beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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