Open Poetry #30 |
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This... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To be this. The vanished drop that rained its final grace across the reaches of your cheek. To be this. The summers warmth caught to the breeze...as it brushes soft against your skin. To be this. To be the more that waits past the limits of desire. To be... This. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc, Well done enjoyed. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This... ...is one I wish I'd written. Very nice, very nice indeed. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Ericc Excellent Margot |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The magic of love is just...this... Beautifully written. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed the take on 'this'..most often I do 'that'..hehe |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
My dear Eric... Your mastery to sing us the most delicate and enchanting love songs is simply....this. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Eric! Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs~ ~ To love and be loved |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is all I need |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric, This... is very well written. Super ![]() ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may you forever extend past this and find "that" always in loves eyes, God Bless You, Happy Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This touch is divine, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is so beautiful, and peaceful feeling. It is wonderful to have ~this~ in our lives. Isn't it? ![]() Hugs to you, ![]() Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww it's that "this" that makes life worth it all. (that closeness) How romantic is this! Loved this! Beautiful, precious words! Full of heart. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-29-2003 12:41 PM).] |
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