Open Poetry #30 |
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My Beloved |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
You whisper in my ear A breath...a soft stirring... I turn, but you are What? My imagination, my dream, my self? My beloved, how I love you. How I yearn again for your touch, For your sweetness to enfold me and lift me to a higher ground. My beloved, You rest...and I seek. You come with the wind and the lightning and the storms. But, only I hear when you speak and whisper the words of love in my ear. When you kiss my cheek with the softness of your soul. You show yourself in the flight of a butterfly. You touch my soul with the flowers you paint. You speak to me through the songs of love. My beloved, how I miss you. How I crave the beating of your heart. How I dance with you in my arms and know you are there, but no one sees. My beloved, I embrace you and you never leave me unfulfilled. But I want you to return. To feel To love To smile To truly whisper that you are mine And I am yours And this is the way it has been.... from the beginning. My beloved. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it Dave |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This leaves me content and sad at the same time. I think it is an honorable write, and a sweet person to create the words. McLean |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such intense longing dear jaicie! Touchingly beautiful is the voice of your heart. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dave, McLean, and Margherita... Thank you so much for your comments...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...even though it is rather sad. It's just that sometimes...mmmmm...well, you know. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweet one... It is often our own imagination and spirit that holds and heals us in the absense... A lovely write. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi jaicie, I especially liked your ending, "from the beginning" Good poetry, you~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
TD and Bluesy... I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you for your replies. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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