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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-16 01:15 PM


The Ice Melts

Ice melts
Stars dash
Thunder booms

Dew my love
An early dew
Searching for blazing sky

Love runs deep
To water fine
A warm and deep caress


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iliana
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1 posted 2004-01-16 03:36 PM


I am enjoying your Ice Maiden poems!
Juju
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2 posted 2004-01-16 09:01 PM


Hmmmm...............
(Sigh...)

Lovely.
Juju

J.Samm
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3 posted 2004-01-16 09:33 PM


love does melt even the most ice- cold hearts. very well- written!
Copperbell
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4 posted 2004-01-16 09:43 PM


I enjoyed this.  It makes me think of the fairy tale ice witch falling in love; however we can all be so frozen.
DavePage
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5 posted 2004-01-18 04:31 PM


The Lady did actually exist and I worked with her

She was proud that she was so cold and would boast until someone turned up her concept via a form of heating

Dave

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