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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-16 03:26 PM






From out of the Blue,
Flown down from the sky,
Out of nowhere,
Your heart heard the whisper of,
My lonely hearts cry,

Softly your wings wrapped around me,
Healing my deadened heart,
You lifted me up,
You wiped the tears from my eyes,

Whispering words of comfort and cheer,
I am surrounded by your angel wings,
How they comfort me,
They remove my darkest fears,

I can hear it when your heart sings,
As if it were the same heartbeat of mine,
My guardian angel,
Of poetry and rhyme,
During darkest hours your wings you will carry me,
Throughout the Rocks and hills,mountains and valleys,
Our love will encounter new discoveries, And our love Will take us to eternity,

The gift you brought to me is that of true love,
Honest and pure as white as a snow dove,

Through your hands to your fingertips,
Through the softness of your words across
my lips,

I am surrounded by your angel wings,
Your words how they capture my heart,
Placing a treasure inside as your mark,

My soul is filled of your wonder and mystery,
Romantic, exquisite love last,
Throughout time and beyond histories past,

Magical thoughts I think of you,
When I am surrounded by your angel wings,

Strength you give me,
Love renewed,
Feathers of your wings,
brush against my cheek,
With your love I become weak,

Hold me close once again to hear your heart beat to mine,
Take this moment, this begining, precious is our time,

Take this day, this hour,
never to depart,
Memories and moments made deep within our
hearts,

When the world closes in,
And when I never seem to win at anything,
I can close my eyes,
Think of you and I,
I hear the melody of your heart as it sings,
And forevermore I am surrounded by Your Angel wings...


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-01-16 03:28 PM


omg.......this is just exquisite and lovely...as is your heart precious gal!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-01-16 03:30 PM


Thanks Spirit....Your words and compliments are very much appreciated...I am humbled..Thank you once again...

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-16 03:39 PM


"When the world closes in,
And when I never seem to win at anything,
I can close my eyes,
Think of you and I,
I hear the melody of your heart as it sings,
And forevermore I am surrounded by Your Angel wings..."

Very very beautiful and much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-01-16 03:44 PM


Thank you nancy I feel very honored to have such humbling words posted from you~

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-16 03:55 PM


"Take this day, this hour,
never to depart,
Memories and moments made deep within our
hearts,"

Your beautiful poem was full of passion!


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2004-01-16 03:58 PM


iliana~thank you for words of kindness~

~ARH


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
7 posted 2004-01-16 06:28 PM


Whew...ARH...the imagery in this is beyond beautiful. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-01-16 06:39 PM


Strength you give me,
Love renewed,
Feathers of your wings,
brush against my cheek,
With your love I become weak,

Hold me close once again to hear your heart beat to mine,
Take this moment, this begining, precious is our time,

Take this day, this hour,
never to depart,
Memories and moments made deep within our
hearts,

When the world closes in,
And when I never seem to win at anything,
I can close my eyes,
Think of you and I,
I hear the melody of your heart as it sings,
And forevermore I am surrounded by Your Angel wings...


Oh, this is soooo beautiful, ARH. Those mountains must be giving you a fresh breath of inspiration, my friend. This part I highlighted reminds me so much of mine and Gary's love. He is my Angel. Thank you for sharing this. I hope you don't mind that I'm keeping it.  
Hugs,  
Ethel



ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
9 posted 2004-01-16 11:10 PM


Wow, you are on a role I see   This is perfection in every way.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-01-17 05:16 AM


very inspiring! very passionate!
Rick
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Victoria, Australia
11 posted 2004-01-17 08:05 AM


Lovely writing ARH, nice to see you posting again. Be well and happy in life my friend.
May they hold you ever tight,
throughout each day and every night
And may the love that's helped you heal
surround your heart so love you'll feel


Sincerely
Rick




Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2004-01-17 04:13 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry as I deam ever so much of my dream girl in the future I yearn to meet and how she always comes to me in the form of an angel who holds my heart and decorates it with promises as I pledge my oath to be faithful to her forever! (wipes tears) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
13 posted 2004-01-17 09:23 PM


A truly beautiful piece of writing from one of the most romantic of hearts.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

14 posted 2004-01-18 12:01 PM


beautiful, simply beautiful...yes, even heavenly
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
15 posted 2004-01-18 12:09 PM


Gorgeous, romantic, wondermus write!  This should be the last I read tonight, for I feel it will induce great dream-filled sleep.  It reads softly, and the picture you added is just beautiful.

McLean

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