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serenities_blood
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0 posted 2004-01-16 03:19 AM



I stand here thinking of you
And you're there thinking of her
But she's there thinking of him

I stand here wishing you'd notice me
And you're there wishing she'd look your way
But she's there wishing he'd just hold her hand

I stand here and try to walk away
And you're there trying to breathe steadily
But she's there itching with frustration

I stand here hoping you aren't an eternal ache
And you're there making promises i know you'll break
But she's there hoping his eyes would wake

We all know loves too much to take

VERY VERY WEIRD!!!

Just something I've found so many times in my life!

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-16 03:24 AM


true...very true
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-16 10:01 AM


I stand here thinking of you
And you're there thinking of her
But she's there thinking of him

ever wonder,,,,,who may be thinking of you?
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 2004-01-16 12:43 PM


A cruel circle sometimes how that works... and how the wonder can add up in your mind.  Very touching and heartfelt.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-16 02:11 PM


Serenities_blood -- this was really, really good -- you are correct, I've seen this so many times!
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