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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Went back again today… Yeah, I promised you I wouldn’t And made intentions clear Not to see the walls Too clean To call them sterile. But you’ve been Gone awhile now. I begged you not to, But you broke Your promise too… Said you’d always love me. Been angry, And to spite your death today I said I loved you Where it was… Begged another one Who hates me, To make it, Like you never did. He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, GG, this breaks my heart. You open windosw into your soul. hugs to you....jo |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
this poem made me cry. your sadness... (i like it-it conveys things to me) "Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn Alyssa...  |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
I'm overwhelmed.... xoxLORxox |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Alyssa.......   Love ya, sweet friend, Ethel |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Not sure what to say. I don't know the situation behind this poem, but the poem gives the main idea and I can definitely see the pain and feel the raw emotions. Amazingly and beautifully written. So not overdone at all - deep and simple. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
iliana, its sad how sometimes the only way to open a window is for it to be shattered... but nevertheless, thank you much for your reply  Kirstin, thank you... it really wasn't that good of a poem by any poetic standards... but all truth. Again, thanks Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, I know but it's ok...serenities blood, what a real reply... thank you for it... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ethel, ...You're so sweet thank you...Endlessecho, it'd take forever to tell the story behind it, but yes, the emotions are raw and it is all said in truth from my heart. I still don't see it as much of a poetic feat, but thank you for your kind reply Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Alyssa, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I wish for your heart to be filled with many stained glass windows of blessings that can never be shattered, sweet friend, know we all think the most of you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Noah, the only problem with stained glass windows is that while they change your perception of something, it isn't always for the better. I guess I'm just not one to mask problems when they arise, so I choose to see everything in full light. But its ok. Thanks for your reply, always so kind Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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