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Open Poetry #30

The Liquid Sky Cruising..

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-01-15 10:56 PM

Note: This poem is dedicated to Raph, Gem, Wind, and Mike. I miss you all!

The sky has gone mad,
with clouds enraged,
the sun speaks to my skin,
what do I feel
..all that I've erased from
my memory, all that's been forgotten,
the heartbeat lacks in existence.

I've been saving
the smoke we shared
in my lungs,
the burning reminder
of why I can't exhale.

These tears I am grateful,
to shed for you,
the liquid sky cruising
down my cheek...If you
could only
see me now..naming
the gods..

..and if I could recall
the first words I'd spoken,
I'd wish I could've
changed them.

If it were known
that there would be no
tomorrow, surely,
I'd regret
everything
I shouldn't have said.

I take back nothing,
keep my heart,
let me cup
my mortality
in my hands..

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-01-15 11:12 PM

The sky has gone mad,
with clouds enraged,
the sun speaks to my skin,
what do I feel
..all that I've erased from
my memory, all that's been forgotten,
the heartbeat lacks in existence.

very good imaging. (I can relate to this well!)
Sadelite

alan6501
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
PA

2 posted 2004-01-15 11:41 PM

Wow, this is amazingly vivid and the images you use are right on the dot! I wish I only had an inkling of your talent for wordplay and imagery!! Excellent Reading!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-15 11:47 PM

Meghan, I miss them, too...and add
Sue and Ed to the list, too....

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