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Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

0 posted 2004-01-15 08:43 PM

With a warm violin in my heart I shall take leave,
To pay tribute before the towering testament of my souls receipt;
Take heed my deliverance before a warm summer’s creed,
Carry my inward destiny to the conclusion of a battles conceit.

Draw thy tine swords and stand thy shields,
Trust thy mortality to tomorrow’s lair,
For thy truth shall be forever faired upon the pasture fields,
And thy existence delivered to the heart of thy widow’s care.

Beacon thy cause and applaud thy right,
Feed thy hungry fury with thy soul’s fervor.
Stay true to thy wills quest to fight,
And never befall to that of a master’s server.

Let thy chariots speak as thy heeding voice,
Ride amongst the winds of thunder to deliver thy spike.
Live in thy humanity with solitude and rejoice,
And learn to love with passion before the ever endearing night.

[This message has been edited by Ravenwolfvoyager (01-15-2004 09:25 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-01-15 09:10 PM

Love this...very nicely penned...
and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2004-01-15 09:23 PM

Hello Jeff

I applaud you for a fabulous piece of writing. Your poems are always written with so much passion and are always so heartfelt by this reader.

Take care........Sue

P.S. It's nice to see a picture of you.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2004-01-15 09:58 PM

Let thy chariots speak as thy heeding voice,
Ride amongst the winds of thunder to deliver thy spike.
Live in thy humanity with solitude and rejoice,
And learn to love with passion before the ever endearing night.

That's a nice message RWV~
You are such a versatile poet,
and this style suits you well.

Enjoyed, very much so~

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

4 posted 2004-01-15 10:02 PM

RWV...

Once again...you magically deliver such a finely-penned piece of art. Thank you.

Nice pic, too!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

5 posted 2004-01-15 10:02 PM

very nicely laced with imagery and penned Jeff

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-01-15 10:37 PM

Let thy chariots speak as thy heeding voice,
Ride amongst the winds of thunder to deliver thy spike.
Live in thy humanity with solitude and rejoice,
And learn to love with passion before the ever endearing night.

RWV:

This write is particularly sparking...
For I know the wonder of the wind and the chariot...and as I read it each time, I felt the beating hoofs through the earth and racing heart that prevails on the journey. This last line was the sum of perfect.
Well done.
TD

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2004-01-15 10:38 PM

Very well written, if I do say so myself. I enjoyed this piece, brilliant.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-01-15 11:19 PM

Ravenwolfvoyager,
Do you happen to have a shorter name? I have a feeling that I'll have to post to it fairly often. There is such rhythm and flow as well as the great imagery...
Sadelite

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-01-16 12:09 PM

A poet, a prophet, or a magician -- perhaps all three you are. I am very much touched by your writing! ........jo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-01-16 12:10 PM

Live in thy humanity with solitude and rejoice,
And learn to love with passion before the ever endearing night.

Jeff, this is so beautiful!! I especially like
these last two lines.....probably the hopeless
romantic in me?

By the way, I like the picture, too.

Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-01-16 03:53 AM

how'd I miss this one?

love the picture!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2004-01-16 07:10 AM

I'm enjoying the sound of this, and especially the magical ring of Kismet. You encourage critiques - one small nit - spelling!

[Tine / thine]

Enjoyed!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2004-01-16 09:30 AM

Jeff~
So privileged was I to have had the opportunity to preview this ... EXCELLENT penning, poet~

'Draw thy tine swords and stand thy shields,
Trust thy mortality to tomorrow’s lair,
For thy truth shall be forever faired upon the pasture fields,
And thy existence delivered to the heart of thy widow’s care'

Especially like the mention of the 'double edged swords' ... creatively unique word workage (yeah, sometimes I make 'em up) in this entire piece~

Your versatility is outstanding my friend~
Nice to 'see' you too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2004-01-16 04:29 PM

I shall dub thee thy knight of poetry~
knight of words and a grand wizard of hidden meanings~

From henceforth will you bleed every word from thy heart~bleeding thy soul onto passions pages of blue~

Nice to finally meet you~

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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