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2writeis2be Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 45Live in London, but from TX |
feel like a crippled person lame whose only movement is his mind stuck in this lifeless body potential energy but I want to be kinetic cementing myself disinclined/intimidated to live yet longing to take the big step forward it’s all just thinking dreaming wondering sometimes it drives me crazy I want out to venture see things experience something if I could get up and go but I can’t stuck confused scared directionally-disabled what is it I want (?) got to find out soon I’m so bored [This message has been edited by 2writeis2be (01-15-2004 07:55 AM).] |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Each day presents its own challanges. A great capture of the reminiscence that goes on through our minds as we ponder life |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I can only imagine this as spoken word and how it would affect your audience--nicely done |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Gets your point accross. Even tho I am not a huge fan of the word "crippled", it does get over how inert you feel. Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Think you've taken the first steps to fixing the boredom problem! Welcome to Passions! |
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