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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-01-15 06:12 PM


I wish you could see
All my pain within
And then maybe
You would understand
How much hurt
I have endured over the years

I wish you could see
How lonely I am
And how my heart
Yearns to love
Someone one day

I wish you could see
So many things
So that one day
You will be able
To understand me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-01-15 07:01 PM


And I wish for good things to happen for you...life doesn't have to be bad... sometimes it is...but that will get better...James
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2004-01-15 07:41 PM


I've known those feelings. I always wish people could see inside me so they could see my pain and the causes of my darkness. If we were all sorcerers, we could look into each other's souls and see what each of us has gone through, but then we'd probably never have had to face it unless there were evil sorcerers, which there probably would be. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

alan6501
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 89
PA
3 posted 2004-01-15 11:37 PM


These feelings are so too familiar...Great read.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-01-16 01:24 AM


And you couldn't not find a better place to share yourself, here, I think.  I wish you love.  
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
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Pennsylvania
5 posted 2004-01-16 10:04 AM


Your words let us see, share, and understand,,,,
sending many hugs
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
6 posted 2004-01-16 11:30 AM


It will be a lucky person, who finally sees'
what you have shown us, the beauty in thee.

Jason

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2004-01-18 09:29 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Julie, I send many angel comfort hugs your way as I understand your feelings and know soon someone will appreciate you for all you are, as you are deserving of stillness! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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