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Open Poetry #30
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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-15 05:30 PM

Skirts blowing in the wind she moved
Grass gripping her feet as an old lover
Wind rippling her hair
Sun dancing her bones
As a friend beating a gentle rhythm
Through her body
To her feet

Echoes of soft breezes
Witnessed
Her move
To abandon freedom
Smiling
At the thought of the sacrifice
Her heart dreamed of

Helta-skelter for the shelter
Fun and laughter for the rain
Dripping through the singing river
Splashing words
To one again
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1 posted 2004-01-15 06:07 PM

Echoes of soft breezes
Witnessed
Her move
To abandon freedom''
I love this.....

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-01-15 07:37 PM

Nice writing...James
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3 posted 2004-01-15 09:46 PM

This is not only a lovely visual but it actually made me feel good.

It reads like spring.

nice.
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4 posted 2004-01-15 10:29 PM

Enjoyed this write Dave! Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    
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5 posted 2004-01-16 04:09 AM

neat write
DavePage
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6 posted 2004-01-18 04:35 PM

Pleased you enjoyed it

Many thanks

Dave
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