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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-01-15 11:33 AM


Grumbles have calmed to a serener smile
Powers miraculously unfold indignant worlds
Applauding joyful arms flame the light of day
Oh the luxury profusely ornaments this place
Where I shall linger in swollen streams
Homes yielding secret languages of kinsmen
Dashing like the ramparts of some handsome chieftain
We bridge the open seas yielding peaceful scenes
Soft thinking crowns the tomb of needy knowledge
Like a pirate sailing on a rising ocean
Privileged…
Where all thoughts skip merrily, into one solid abode
My face feeling its weightlessness, where darkness once lodged
A kindling flame of herbs, their middle air responds
Smiling foliage cladding hill to dale
Fate lifts his warming limbs of cherished trails
Poignant melodious expressions, inviting smooth upright walks
Boldly transporting pulses with life and passionate shamrocks
Oh, that seamless space, compels a sense of limitless sovereign
Meeting intimate on the tongue of significance and grace
Stroking fingers reaching, messaging my heart…intangible its value
Which does not tire, from a long loving stare…
Taking my mind by the hand, holding split moments forever
Homespun essentials rushing to my side, with four leaf clovers
I am left with the autonomy of feelings, contrived by an inner nature
Of pleasant pastures interacting with an invisible partner
Shimmering grace, pearlescent organic verse
Drizzling some fine Amethyst moonshine
Unforgettable fusions swooning my mind
Candlelight and moonlight casting golden shadows on the water
Loving me perfectly, beading daylight clusters


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-15 01:31 PM


Oh, that seamless space, compels a sense of limitless sovereign
Meeting intimate on the tongue of significance and grace
Stroking fingers reaching, messaging my heart…intangible its value
Which does not tire, from a long loving stare…
Taking my mind by the hand, holding split moments forever
Homespun essentials rushing to my side, with four leaf clovers
I am left with the autonomy of feelings, contrived by an inner nature
Of pleasant pastures interacting with an invisible partner
Shimmering grace, pearlescent organic verse
Drizzling some fine Amethyst moonshine
Unforgettable fusions swooning my mind
Candlelight and moonlight casting golden shadows on the water
Loving me perfectly, beading daylight clusters

Oh Lee, this is so beautiful and romantic...
Ethel  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-01-15 02:12 PM


LeeJ
A delight to read. The literature of literarcy.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-01-15 05:13 PM


LeeJ -- what could I possibly say beside you are such an excellent writer.  
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