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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-01-11 09:32 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I am always very conscious
Of my nearness to you
Your presence never leaves me
You are a part of all I do

I never knew how to worship
But now to love I am a slave
You fill up all my senses
For it is your love that I crave

In love everything is mutual
You and I have become we
My love will last as long as
The sun sets beneath the sea

Two souls share a single thought
And two hearts beat as one
Your love cannot be compared
For your love is second to none

* * *

"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"




I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-01-11 09:37 PM


Nice words

Dave

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2 posted 2004-01-11 09:59 PM


I havn't even been here 3 mintues and I've already found a great piece of work. keep it up.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-12 02:29 AM


another gorgeously romantic piece
Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-12 02:36 PM


ohhhh, I love it!,,,,saved, kept, and will be shared with my Mikey,,,,thank you for such a wonderful post!
take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-12 04:46 PM


Two souls share a single thought
And two hearts beat as one
Your love cannot be compared
For your love is second to none

* * *

"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"

Suetang, this is so sweet and true!  Beautiful poem and I love the picture!


Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-01-12 04:47 PM


Oh so very beautiful Sue!
Much enjoyed the read sweet poetess.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

vandana
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7 posted 2004-01-12 04:52 PM


enjoyed
SmartChick
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8 posted 2004-01-12 07:15 PM


Beautiful, Sue. As always. You know, I think I had a glimpse of heaven, one time.
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9 posted 2004-01-12 07:48 PM


That is a wonderful write Sue, you amaze me with your powerful writes. A truly captivating poem and wonderfully served.  
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10 posted 2004-01-12 09:19 PM


A very beautiful statement to another, from
one who loves deeply and with all their heart
and soul.

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11 posted 2004-01-15 06:38 PM


Sue:  Another beautiful poem and picture. Thanks for sending it to me.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

dinky
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12 posted 2004-01-15 06:47 PM


"Two souls share a single thought
And two hearts beat as one
Your love cannot be compared
For your love is second to none"

this was my favorite part of your poem
great write, i loved it

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