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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-01-15 03:22 AM

From this frosted pane,
the half moon appears shattered
with so many dreams--
they rise and brighten the long night
and disperse upon awaking.

[This message has been edited by choshi (01-15-2004 09:13 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2004-01-15 03:39 AM

wow...very vivid image here...and sadly yes, what you write is true

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-01-15 09:15 AM

"...and sadly yes, what you write is true"

sadly true, yes...and bittersweet ~C

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-15 09:50 AM

choshi -- this is imagery at its finest! Yes, and bittersweet. I just love your work. ..........jo

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

4 posted 2004-01-15 10:09 AM

Oh, very good. Choshi, I think this is my favorite of yours thus far. Excellent!

McLean

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-01-15 10:20 AM

Iliana, I find both your poems and your responses very inspiring... and your kindness very warming... ~C

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-01-15 10:21 AM

Thank you McLean, I very much appreciate your comment...~C

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

7 posted 2004-01-15 11:42 AM

Oh...Paul...such a wondrous, if bittersweet, write...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-01-15 11:46 AM

I was here and enjoyed.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-15 01:21 PM

Oh...Paul...such a wondrous, if bittersweet, write...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

Thank you jc, and ditto: Love & Light ~C

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-01-15 01:23 PM

I was here and enjoyed.

Thank you Susan, glad you enjoyed ~C

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

11 posted 2004-01-16 03:44 PM

"they rise and brighten the long night
and disperse upon awaking."

again, so much said...i actually find this uplifting,(i think shattered dreams dont have to be painful) dreams are an inexhaustable resource! You really hit target here

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