Open Poetry #30 |
God Tonite |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
God Tonite If I could be God tonite, I'd make sure that you kissed me and held me tight. But what would tomorrow nite bring... A slap, a scream, rejection, broken dreams? JamesLee January14 2004 |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Never, my Dear...promise! Good write! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Good write,,,,,,funny tho,,,when it comes to "god",,,the "next night" seems to be the norm. Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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rainydaymusic Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 26 |
It's great.. in my head, it starts off quiet and the end, picks up pace. I like it a lot. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Rather believe always that He has a plan even when something falls apart unforunately and by believing you will find all the burden lifted, yay! (big angel hugs) I send hope angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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