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Winter Sleep |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Winter Sleep (Haiku) Icy wind blows snow Across the frozen white bay Summer lies beneath.  believe in what your heart feels... |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Nicely Done will be looking forward to more :clapping J |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you J. I appreciate your comments and support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent dear Scorpio... You know how much I love these! *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Snow sits on cold steps leading to the cabin door, waits for my return. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker thank you for your warm response on this frosty winter morning!! YOUr support is always appreciated. May I clear the snow from your steps this morning? believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (01-15-2004 12:21 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now THAT'S Haiku! Thank you! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done my friend.. and we sometimes need to be reminded what is beneath.. I thank you for this one. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ah...digging deeper to find what is hidden...well done and a beautiful picture as well! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I see summer in the cool reflection also Beatiful Haiku ha! McLean |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
very nice scorpio and lovely pic as well. hugs, Chris  "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Karilea, thank you. My muse inspired this write. The credit goes to her. I'm pleased that you liked this Ron. Thank you. I appreciate your kind words, Susan. Thank you, MacLean. Glad you stopped in. Thank you, Chris. Your encouragement and support is very much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio? ...C'mere  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Scorpio -- good one, and I liked the photo with it! [This message has been edited by iliana (01-16-2004 12:32 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous...I am patiently waiting for what's underneath to emerge |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker, I'll be right there!! Iliana, thank you for your kind reply. I like the picture too. My muse picked it out. Passing shadows, thanks you. Yes so am I. Enough of winter. Bring on spring!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay, and may we cherish this season and anticipate the summer to shed colors among every sparkling lake! (big angel hugs) Love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Scorpio -- good one, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
oh...this is good...so many haiku are great in form, but lack substance in thought or at best are highly strained. this is a work of art. congrats. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Chrissypooh. It was very kind of you to read and comment. Steavenr, I appreciate your kind words of support and encouragement. Thank you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is a little gem! ~*~Lovely |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
It is a deep thought and layered well. Applicable to love that lies dormant beneath the shell. Excellent write Scorpio!! Thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a lovely Haiku, I almost missed this. Beautiful words and lovely pic. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Muted. You're very kind. Ravenwolfvoyager I appreciate your comments. Thank you. Thank you Gentle Spirit. I'm glad you enjoyed this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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