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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-01-14 09:51 PM



Winter Sleep (Haiku)

Icy wind blows snow
Across the frozen white bay
Summer lies beneath.



believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2004-01-14 10:07 PM


Nicely Done
will be looking forward   to more :clapping J

scorpio
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2 posted 2004-01-15 07:52 AM


Thank you J.  I appreciate your comments and support.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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3 posted 2004-01-15 08:58 AM


Excellent dear Scorpio...
You know how much I love these!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Snow sits on cold steps
leading to the cabin door,
waits for my return.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

scorpio
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4 posted 2004-01-15 09:01 AM


Tinker thank you for your warm response on this frosty winter morning!!  YOUr support is always appreciated.  May I clear the snow from your steps this morning?  

believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (01-15-2004 12:21 PM).]

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5 posted 2004-01-15 09:04 AM



Now THAT'S Haiku!
Thank you!

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6 posted 2004-01-15 09:05 AM


nicely done my friend.. and we sometimes need to be reminded what is beneath.. I thank you for this one.


Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-01-15 09:35 AM


Ah...digging deeper to find what is hidden...well done and a beautiful picture as well!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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8 posted 2004-01-15 10:17 AM


I see summer in
the cool reflection also
Beatiful Haiku

ha!

McLean

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9 posted 2004-01-15 10:58 AM


very nice scorpio and lovely pic as well. hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

scorpio
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10 posted 2004-01-15 11:44 AM


Karilea, thank you.  My muse inspired this write.  The credit goes to her.

I'm pleased that you liked this Ron.  Thank you.

I appreciate your kind words, Susan.

Thank you, MacLean.  Glad you stopped in.

Thank you, Chris.  Your encouragement and support is very much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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11 posted 2004-01-15 12:03 PM


Scorpio?

...C'mere  

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12 posted 2004-01-15 12:29 PM


Scorpio -- good one, and I liked the photo with it!

[This message has been edited by iliana (01-16-2004 12:32 AM).]

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13 posted 2004-01-15 12:52 PM


just gorgeous...I am patiently waiting for what's underneath to emerge
scorpio
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14 posted 2004-01-15 02:57 PM


Tinker, I'll be right there!!

Iliana, thank you for your kind reply.  I like the picture too. My muse picked it out.

Passing shadows, thanks you.  Yes so am I.  Enough of winter.  Bring on spring!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2004-01-17 06:44 PM




(smiles) Yay, and may we cherish this season and anticipate the summer to shed colors among every sparkling lake! (big angel hugs) Love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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16 posted 2004-01-20 09:19 PM


Scorpio -- good one,
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17 posted 2004-01-20 09:27 PM


oh...this is good...so many haiku are great in form, but lack substance in thought or at best are highly strained.  this is a work of art.  congrats.
scorpio
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18 posted 2004-01-20 09:40 PM


Thank you Chrissypooh.  It was very kind of you to read and comment.

Steavenr, I appreciate your kind words of support and encouragement.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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19 posted 2004-01-21 01:59 AM


this is a little gem!
~*~Lovely

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20 posted 2004-01-21 09:02 AM


It is a deep thought and layered well. Applicable to love that lies dormant beneath the shell. Excellent write Scorpio!! Thank you.
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21 posted 2004-01-21 09:03 AM


What a lovely Haiku, I almost missed this.  Beautiful words and lovely pic.  
scorpio
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22 posted 2004-01-22 09:50 AM


Thank you Muted.  You're very kind.

Ravenwolfvoyager  I appreciate your comments.  Thank you.

Thank you Gentle Spirit. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

believe in what your heart feels...

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