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Open Poetry #30

mime me a dream

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-14 07:12 PM

mime me a dream

sliver slices
    serrated thoughts
knife me
through the doughy
foundation

shadow dweller
sand shaped gilder
silver refractor of
your soul

moon_me_mad
   lily - coat - my
eyes
the color of yours

so that your empty
is mine
  mime me a dream
through this half full
half drained
day

©snow'04

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2004-01-14 08:09 PM

beautifully crafted word play, left me wanting more.......

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

2 posted 2004-01-14 08:11 PM

You pour much depth into your writes, each as enjoyable as the first. Thank you again for the share and I look forward to reading the many more.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-01-15 12:55 PM

snow,

what a really cool read. this one is one of those you read over and over just to let it really speak to you. very nicely done. loved it.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-15 03:56 AM

very cool!

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