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Open Poetry #30

Dormant

MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-01-14 05:27 PM

I stumbled upon visionaries in the sand
am I there?
I'm not here
but can you see me there?
look a little farther
I'm in the shadows
picking myself apart

I am the dormant fool
               damned fool
               defeated fool
               dead fool
               emerged-once-more-
               to-die-again fool
               love-me-and-ill-go-home fool

the road unwinds in circles
this long, strange trip
but GOD can't save me now--
i am the dormant fool

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-01-14 07:38 PM

M.C.B.,
   I feel alot  of emotion here;  I feel life in this. Good luck-I'll try to catch another post soon.
    Take care.
                     Sadelite

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

2 posted 2004-01-14 07:59 PM

The world can be a crowded place. When you are trying to aspire or leap forward you can sometimes feel shadowed and placed back into the corner. I enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing.

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