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Xonicx
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since 2004-01-14
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Vancouver, WA

0 posted 2004-01-14 01:42 AM



Soothing words of comfort fill my ears
Everything fades including my fears
With the star filled sky above
Angel holding me with her familiar love
All seems right on this perfect night
Everything okay and feeling right
The soft summer breeze evening air brushes your beautiful face
Our heart, mind, and soul lost in another place
Far off from negativity of the real world in which we live
Just to hold onto this place the world we’d give
Loosing ourselves in each others eyes
Seeing everything so clear without any lies
Love is what we have and love is what we’ll keep
Until the ends of time I’ll be holding you to weep


© Copyright 2004 Benjamin Allen Chapin - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-01-14 01:46 AM


Beautiful words of love.....enjoyed!
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-01-14 11:15 AM


I don't believe I've seen your first post, so will take this moment to Welcome you to Passions!  I think you're going to enjoy it here!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-01-14 08:09 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Very pretty and peaceful first post.
ThisDiamond

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