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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2004-01-14 03:48 PM



On the brink of sanity
playing Russian roulette
with lovely Seraphs
dressed in varied shades
of sorrows
in some dark corner
of my mind

Aimlessly wandering
peering out from my darkness
for answers
I can never find

Dreaming of heaven
in monocrome
as I fall from grace
inside my bleeding soul

Standing on the corner
of yesturday and tommorow
asking for dreams
from the drunk passed out in the gutter
in hopes that someday
I might find my way home


© Copyright 2004 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-01-14 04:25 PM


I have no doubt that you will.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

GG
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2004-01-18 10:47 PM


Home, I guess, is a relative thing. I know the place I stay is only my house....

I don't know why you don't have more replies to this...
I love it.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-01-18 11:05 PM


Sounds like you've been here!  Good writing.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-19 04:54 AM


yeah...me too

you're not alone

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2004-03-13 10:11 AM


You'll find your way home....
A poem many can relate to....including me!!!!
Good write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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