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sundown shadows |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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the sun begins to slip into the silken drape where the wide sea embraces the sky tenderly perhaps one can find quietude resting on crimson-tinged waves ~ a family of birds hastens its flight homewardly bound charting course nestwards that’s when silent eyes turn moist measuring lengthening shadows ~ haven't written much lately... but haven't given up... not yet, anyway... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My friend.. this captures in a not quite way something profound.. not quite spelling out the details and not quite letting the reader see it all.. enticing them to think..and to reflect themselves on the flight of birds and their own silent eyes... nicely done sir.. I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Good one, enjoyed the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful write! *S* I like this very much. *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was good -- I liked the visuals effect it left with me! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very well done |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all, my dear friends... regards sudhir |
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