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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Touché Touché, you’ve torn a tender spot You’ve thorn the leaf forget-me-not And I am wounded through the heart A mortal blow the wound impart If I were cat, I’d have eight more But I have only one in store Unless you count a moments end A moment dead that ends it’s wend Perhaps my heart will beat anew A moment lived a moment true I’ll search horizons moving mime Perhaps I’ll find another’s time But death is such a hapless thing So hard the malice of the sting It plucks the grape from out the vine And shucks of it a deadly wine Know you not this sip of store A little dip of, evermore |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Excellent.... But death is such a hapless thing So hard the malice of the sting It plucks the grape from out the vine And shucks of it a deadly wine bravo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Perhaps my heart will beat anew A moment lived a moment true I’ll search horizons moving mime Perhaps I’ll find another’s time with closure there always comes anew, and with this inspiration...you will indeed flourish and sing once again...with the greatness of life and forever after... Hugs...Lee J. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Sy.. I enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed this morning's read Sy! Waking up to a write like this from you... and a hot cup of Chai tea..is heaven.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A write packed with wisdom, Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps my heart will beat anew A moment lived a moment true I’ll search horizons moving mime Perhaps I’ll find another’s time ~*~ Touché, indeed. Poems can be applied in so many ways, Sy - today I shall appliqué this as a bandaid in need.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Touché, you’ve torn a tender spot You’ve thorn the leaf forget-me-not And I am wounded through the heart A mortal blow the wound impart ================================ What you need is a kiss on the cheek ... and some TLC till your knees go weak. Some sweet nothings whispered in your ear ... poetic proof that you are held so very dear. If a Daisy's petals speak true of "loves me-loves me not" Then Eden's blooms are bursting, so dont doubt you're loved a lot.   *winkie winkie* sweet Stinkie  Nature poets can't walk across the backyard without tripping over an epiphany. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A winter wonderland write this morning dear Seymour. At least....winter wonderland where I am !! Let's sit and chat with our tea and carrot cake. hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Youngatheart Thank you for the excellent and the bravo. LeeJ Thank you sweet. Hugs Cpat Thanks for the nicely. Nancy, Your tea will hit the spot. Hugs scorpio You are sweet Sunshine Thank you love. JM, How are you doing on the computer hunt, well I hope. Thank you for the TLC that's always nice to have. I miss you Tink. WWRS Chris, Be right there for carrot cake and tea. Hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one feels as though you've been skinned and salted... let me at the culprit and I'll give 'em hell. *S* Excellent work, my dear friend... you can make even wretchedness beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Now that is a sweet reply. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Perhaps my heart will beat anew A moment lived a moment true I’ll search horizons moving mime Perhaps I’ll find another’s time But death is such a hapless thing So hard the malice of the sting It plucks the grape from out the vine And shucks of it a deadly wine Excellent write Seymour, this was truly a remarkable piece and soul captivating. I give it a "Mozart" well done Seymour. Thanks for sharing the spirit of your gift. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager A pleasure to read your reply, thank you. |
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