Open Poetry #30 |
Tropical Heat |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As a palm tree fans across the sea, let me be your passionate flora, draped gracefully. Let me ease the burning sensation and shade you from the summers sweltering. Let me be your paradise breeze and the lush ferns that thrive on humidity. Let me be the snap in your sails caressing your face, offshore in the wind. Let me be your day after tomorrow painting pastels in the sky at twilight. Let me rock you to sleep in a tropical heat and swim in your eyes at sunrise. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Just a little something to warm up a winters day~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-14-2004 02:24 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, you knock me off my feet with some of your one liners, like: "Let me rock you to sleep in a tropical heat and swim in your eyes at sunrise." Absolutely, beautiful! .........jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It does feel mighty hot in here, now that you mention it! Wow! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
iliana~ That was sweet of you, thank you so much. In spite of the nice weather we're having on the left coast, it gets cold at night, and I think my heater died. Thanks ER~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and let me sit with you with a couple of bahama mamas by the caribbean blue and watch the island boys shake their booties for us o a nice winter warmup thanks goldengirl |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Let me be the snap in your sails caressing your face, offshore in the wind. I never could resist sailing. Such elegant offers for closeness. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
send some warm this way...I am getting tired of collecting wood to burn I forgot how wonderful a woodstove is. shame on me for not using it before now hugs...enjoyed your words M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yes... the temperature's rising. *S* Beautiful work, my friend! *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin... You brought the sunshine for sure...giggling at Inky... Wonderful. TD |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful warmth.....will keep this to re read when winter roars its ugly head.... hugssss sweet lady Lauren~ ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Blues... Fantastic imagery...thanks for sharing! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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