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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I gave you the gift of what you need but now your anger seems to feed, I must admit, I dont understand why... I gave you your freedom, but yet you won't fly... When your wings were broken, I took you in hoping in time that you would heal again, yes the wounds healed slowly but never fully, just in part because of the scars that remained buried deep in your heart... Love is a gift to be given as well as to be received, but it can not help heal if it isn't believed.... It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Broken wings rely on a deep sense of will to heal properly. While you gave the love and support to your broken bird, still and all, it has to be within that heart to heal fully. In knowing you did your best, is knowing you did your all. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Love is a gift to be given as well as to be received, but it can not help heal if it isn't believed.... What a great verse...I think I believe to much. I see love in every person I come into contact with...which is probably why my heart is never quite given out. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is very touching...I could relate to the reader's side and to the writer's side too. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write dear Donna. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is such a good message Donna~ Love is not necessarily all things, is it? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You make a terrific point in the last stanza! Good write! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
ahhhhh, very true...great Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
yes the wounds healed slowly but never fully, just in part because of the scars that remained buried deep in your heart... Yep...you got that right kiddo. Great write Donna. hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Love is a gift to be given as well as to be received, but it can not help heal if it isn't believed.... Donna, this is so true. Until a person can receive love from another, they surely can't feel it....or believe it. Hugs, sweet lady  Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss  I know this....~*~ |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Truly a truth bestowed write. After the light has passed and the shadow commences why do you wish to share my candlelight with me when you wouldn't share with me the passing day. Thank you for writing such a great piece. It is a wonderful and captivating write! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks all.  Ravenwolf...thanks for those thoughts, You saw exactly what I was feeling...as a writer that is a wonderful feeling to know it was conveyed to a reader ... and understood. |
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