Dropping in ( How I came to be here challenge REWRITE)

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Open Poetry #30

Dropping in ( How I came to be here challenge REWRITE)

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-01-13 10:51 AM

Blue walls, awaiting me.
A poem to offer, millions to take in.
I was offered one day,
from the flagpole I waited
as butterfly kisses fluttered in the air
As Larry bowed his head,
Candle lights flickered, in every hand
She was daddy's little girl

Without purity and grace,
and heart of laughter and love.
I would never have met thee
A poem,
of a teacher who shines so bright
I was brought here
by the graceful hand of an angel.
This was all meant to be

Passionate with,
divine love from poetry
enjoyment of literary phenomenon
A circle, so round.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

1 posted 2004-01-13 10:54 AM

Kellie,
This is very good. I can picture the whole scene, very calming.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-13 03:04 PM

I hope talent is kind with you

I wont say that I understood your words but the clarity purpose source destination and aim I can't fault.

Dave

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2004-01-13 04:22 PM

Hello Kellie

This was a wonderful piece of writing and I am so glad you found your way here.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

4 posted 2004-01-13 04:31 PM

Your reflections on fate in this poem are sweet and airy. i like it!

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

5 posted 2004-01-13 11:13 PM

Kellie~glad you're here hun. I can see how you've grown.

sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-13 11:21 PM

Kellie -- I know what you mean. I saw you are graduating, congratulations! What's your field of study?

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

7 posted 2004-01-14 10:26 AM

Iliana- High School

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

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