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ambrya_nell
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since 2004-01-11
Posts 28
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-13 03:26 AM


All the chaos & noise
can only be calmed by your voice.
All my fears I try to explain
but hell awaits to cast the blame.

Your touch could cause a sin.
You busy yourself within my skin.
My fight to win is wearing thin,
you're all I need to begin.

All your reasons so hard to swallow
all my morals do is follow.
Please abide by this distance,
I can no longer justify my resistance.

Your touch could cause a sin.
You bury yourself within my skin.
My fight to win is wearing thin,
you're all I need to begin.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-01-13 03:28 AM


sounds like you and I are in the same boat
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-01-13 05:20 PM


Absolutely WOW!  The temptation of passion so well described here.  Really liked it!  
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3 posted 2004-01-14 10:01 AM


I  AM  GOING  TO  LOOK  UP  ALL  YOUR  POEMS.

This boy's been missing out!

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2004-01-14 10:45 AM


Absolutely!
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-01-14 10:53 AM


*grinz*  excellent!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
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6 posted 2004-01-16 01:45 PM


WOW!  Boy have I been there... this really went many different ways inside me, truly amazing

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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