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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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It takes a broken heart that aches more tangible than you may think to find that inner place of peace and make it fly and mean it like yellow roses speak a language all their own bloom and grow outside the gate landing where the seeds have flown taking care to clear the air arranged in a bouquet of song bittersweet the melody that fills the wonder, full~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, this was lovely. I'm in total agreement with what you say so eloquently. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Just beautiful! I needed words like this tonight, thank you. Saving it. ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's pretty |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
live how u sing the bittersweet blues bluesygirl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bluesy, everything you write is something that I love! Well done. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A most heartfelt write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And the melody of this lingers long after the read is over... Beautiful work, lady! *S* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"bittersweet the melody that fills the wonder, full~" Oh, I do like that, Bluesy!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, it does...and yes they do. And yes you do. Yellow roses...the perfect color for this, the right meaning. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Dang, I think this is the best that I have read tonight! Awesome!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you everyone, for stopping to smell the roses. They really did bloom on their own, just about the time I thought they were dead! Wonders never cease, and can be the nicest inspiration. Thanks again, so much! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
inspiring :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is lovely Blues. Takes me away from the winter day to a springtime garden in my mind. hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful..well written, just perfect. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This has a whimsical quality about it. Love the words and your choice of display. McLean |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love yellow roses... beautifully said Ms Blues M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I was going to copy and paste my favorites of this beautiful poem, and found myself about to copy all of it. LOL It is beautiful and I love yellow roses too.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A wonderful write that could be put to song along with the violin sonata's of Beethoven's. Inspiring! Thank you. |
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