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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-01-12 09:14 PM

A letter, borne on the wings of war,
given as a gift, one treasured piece of
written speech....to be whispered eloquently
into the waiting ear.

A stirring of heart upon the maiden’s sigh,
loftily taken into the moon’s rise, left hanging
tenderly, twirling in the breeze of a comet’s
brush....unopened.

Oh but to feel and see the face of passionate
blush before the rustle of a morning air onto
the silkiness of a slumbering face...before a
smile opens to the pearlescent view of dreams
lying contentedly on the warmth of a chest
beating courageously, in wait of a knock upon
the chambers door...

And when comes the rap and tap of wooden
slats before the waking rise, let the breath of
one’s surprise carry the scurry of farewell
silently into the empty corridors....

Until again we meet...and a letter falls in
feather’s flutter...proclaiming to all of
love in hurried verse upon a fortnight
clear.

Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

1 posted 2004-01-12 09:19 PM

this is the second post by you that I've read and I've enjoyed reading both of them. Your one that I'm going to be paying close attention to.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-01-12 09:20 PM

Thank You, that is a very pleasing comment.
I hope you continue to enjoy my and our poetry.

Barry

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-01-12 09:21 PM

Absolutely beautiful Barry!
Very much enjoyed!
Your writing has grown SOOO much...
as have my sighs!

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-01-12 09:23 PM

Hi Nance!! Tanx Kid! Now, where is your
half of our duet? The one I am waiting to
start??

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-01-12 11:18 PM

This was simply breathtaking! hugs.....jo

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

6 posted 2004-01-12 11:20 PM

Breathtaking...I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!
so romantic...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-01-13 09:48 AM

Very stirring.

Eric

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2004-01-13 10:07 AM

Magnus my dear friend, this yet another wonderful write. Very much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2004-01-13 11:23 AM

nicely done Mr Smooth... as usual..lol

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2004-01-13 03:29 PM

Beautiful work. *S*

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