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Open Poetry #30

A Battered Soul

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

0 posted 2004-01-12 12:40 PM

A Battered Soul

Something tears
My inside apart,
Whenever anyone touches
My fiancé with art.
Eyes do bleed
And
Me feel hurt,
Seems like storm
In my heart.

What would life be?
Without She,
I think,
My soul may leave me
Nothing would blink.

I would be mad
And sure be sad,
Would feel being stripped
Of cloths I had.

About that I think,
Wouldn’t really matter,
But
For the spirit
I care,
Would be bruised bleed
And
Cruelly battered.

~~~~*HARASMAHAJAN*©~~~~

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

1 posted 2004-01-12 01:41 PM

This is a poem about your love, so why the title with the words battered soul? Love shouldn't beat you up.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-12 03:14 PM

yes...love shouldn't hurt,,,never the less, make your eyes bleed,,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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