Open Poetry #30 |
Balance |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
She's not you but on the other hand you're not her. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
she better NOT be !!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh this resulted in two good reads...the poem, and the fact that Helen is feeling better! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I LOVE THIS! I love what it says, I love how it looks! Very creative, and simple and full! ~McLean |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Cute piece. I like the way you presented it. Very simple...yet with a deeper meaning ever so evident. There is difference yet balance. Well done. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Love the one you're with ?..... Remember the one who got you to who you're with.... Michelle |
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nothing Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 23Northumberland, UK |
Simple, elegant. Doesn't need anything more =D. Poetry refined down to a few perfect grains. Making sense is overrated |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Clever, oh so clever! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this...and I too am glad to see Helen responding! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Amen that! Been worried about you, Slick One! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And that truly says it all. *S* As mentioned before... there is elegance in these few words that say so much... excellent work! *S* |
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