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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-12 01:20 AM



Closed...asleep with
sadness.

The eyes of my heart
sleep.

So much pain, tears cried,
swollen shut.

They wait for loves soothing,
cleansing balm.

closed...they rest in peaceful
slumbers tranquility of dreams.

Love is calling...

Open the eyes of my heart,
so I may see love
again...

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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1 posted 2004-01-12 01:39 AM


They wait for loves soothing,
cleansing balm.
            sad..
but what if it's love,
that is the cause of pain,
then all the waiting,
will go down the drain.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-01-12 01:43 AM


Thanks Ambrish, love has caused the pain, but new love brings tears of happiness not sadness....when new happy tears come, they cleanse the heart of pain....

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-12 01:50 AM


it's okay to close...it's easier to heal that way...but you are still alive and very much full of love


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-01-12 01:54 AM


Thanks Dixie, yes I am very much alive..my heart still beats, but you are right when closing them to heal....

thanks~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA
5 posted 2004-01-12 01:54 AM


Romantic Heart...Very sad; but beautiful in a dark way. The toll of heartbreak emanating through your words.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2004-01-12 01:59 AM


Thank you Ivy..poetry seems to help heal when in pain, flooding the soul of so much emotion and feeling.

~ARH

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