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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-27 12:42 PM



I thought
I had lost
my way…
So, I asked Source
for guidance.

He sent me You.

I thought
I had forgotten
how to love.
So, I asked Source
for clarity.

You kissed my cheek.

I thought
I had it
All figured out.
So, I thanked Source
for my knowledge.

And, You said,
“You’re welcome.”

Knowing You,
Loving You,
Being One with You
Is the divine gift
We offer to
Each other.

Here…now….
and forever.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2003-11-27 12:44 PM


Cool and beautiful -- wonderful combination!!! Wow!!  Great metaphors
jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-11-27 01:04 AM


Oh, my goodness...

Thank you for your kind comments...Steavenr.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (11-27-2003 01:05 AM).]

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-11-27 10:36 AM


We only have to ask Jc.
Thanks for these prayerful words...beautiful.

Love,
Eric

Margot
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4 posted 2003-11-27 10:38 AM


jaicie114,

Beautiful


Margot

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5 posted 2003-11-27 10:45 AM


A wonderful little poem, especially for a day when folks who love each other try to be together. Nice work!

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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
6 posted 2003-11-27 08:24 PM


Eric, Margot, Ratleader...

Thank you so much for your comments. They are always welcome in my heart.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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