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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

0 posted 2004-01-11 07:52 PM

Come, February

Why do I have to wait for you
wearing your cold plate of sky

I can drain down in this sun warm
chill-off in memories closet anytime

No  not sky a cloud

Listen to the edge
aware of thin lines
then fall

Feel the way the skin turns
like opening oranges
bitter    bitter
the sweet

Down   down
into the sweet juice of grief
is a place pure and remorseless

Yes, I can find you
any time

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1-02

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-11 08:10 PM

Ahh, my friend...
I'm still opening
tangerines
and feeling the fruit juice well...
when we allow the swell, sometimes the bitter
becomes sweet...

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-11 08:24 PM

Edges of the skin

Yes

Words can sometimes move you
to understand what moves you

I enjoyed your words.

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-01-11 08:41 PM

Awesome Martie!
Love this sweet poetess.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

4 posted 2004-01-11 08:45 PM

lovely

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2004-01-11 09:06 PM

"Feel the way the skin turns
like opening oranges
bitter    bitter
the sweet

Down   down
into the sweet juice of grief
is a place pure and remorseless

Yes, I can find you
any time"

It's amazing what you did with this image.  Truly enjoyed Martie.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2004-01-11 09:58 PM

"into the sweet juice of grief
is a place pure and remorseless"

Yes, and it is always there.

Thank you for sharing this.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-01-11 11:16 PM

"...if carrying could be..."

Don't be too anxious to find grief. It finds us all, and the world has already delivered more than you deserve.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2004-01-12 01:27 AM

heart hugssss....this is amazing Martie!
Lauren~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-12 01:57 AM

just gorgeous!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-01-12 07:01 AM

All humanity needs to sing,
Poem songs, as this we need...
Love the lyrics of this piece,
Dear Martie;
Especially these....

"Down down
into the sweet juice of grief
is a place pure and remorseless"
________ice
><>

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2004-01-12 03:01 PM

Yes Martie, you can find her anytime..she's only a blink away

this is beautiful.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

12 posted 2004-01-12 03:41 PM

Martie - you write of inner things that touch my heart with such power and evoke such feelings - loved this poem and I ache with you - Paul

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2004-01-12 04:11 PM

My oh my Martie. hugs for this, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

14 posted 2004-01-12 04:44 PM

I can drain down in this sun warm

oh yes, I think I remember that! Nicely expressed.
Sadelite

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2004-01-12 04:52 PM

liked it a lot

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2004-01-12 04:54 PM

SweetSister~
A from my for all your memories~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2004-01-12 05:17 PM

It's always there... invited and welcomed or not, it waltzes in... and rules during its visit. *S* I remember this beautiful write... *S*

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

18 posted 2004-01-12 08:55 PM

Martie this is very wonderful. A serenity, and peace comes across as I read your words. I feel basked in Februarys warmth and captivated by the surroundings that you've placed me in. Thank you.

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