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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2004-01-11 03:24 PM




Is this in reference to a weather forecast
When local pain at wrist joints last
or in reference to a presentation of character
you knew when concerns develop, they'd somehow matter
couldn't quite put your finger on it,
the odd character nipped at the Achille's heel
last night's episode induced a spontaneous feel
the character wanted you for your body
that screamed, 'my body is part of me'...
but the lover was determined to exact a fee
return at his will for more of the same, you see

Now when that winter chill sets in
out on a crisp day's motorcar spin
and local pain episodes erupt
love's potion ingested did corrupt
there are those subtle intimate reminders
you glimpsed back through the car's viewfinder
and knew that some character demands cannot be fulfilled
accepted that fatal attractions cling to window sills

Fatal attractions they were
an Achille's heel brushed a burr
it was a predictable affair
t'was the young in us that dared.

© Copyright 2004 ecrivan




[This message has been edited by wordwizard (01-11-2004 06:22 PM).]

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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2004-01-11 03:34 PM


Right on the mark, Wiz.
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