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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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School of the Fine Arts Three dimensional canvases weild power to chase off a chill Self-imposed silence, slid into a warm bath of chenille Accurately aware of every nerve passage in the mass Carried along sensory fibers, billions of communicating paths Scenic neurons spiraling…linking against cool drafts Eternity yawns, swallowing oblivion My eyes snapped open, to a natural awareness Like an endless sky in a dream without sound A kindly healer known to everyone as God Wielding an emotional sledgehammer for broken moods Thick with the blood of those that blast optimistic tunes Therein lives the tutoring, the cultural shock… The great imbalance and nighthawks Wine remembers nothing more then adopted sugars moot It arranges a snapshot quite suggestively acute Sharpened on sultry promises easily skinned Splattering sonnets caught in a cross winds Ode to the tag on my shoes Surly given by true to life eyes of genes and parented virtue Thank God for the gloves of an all consuming fire For the doves which cross our lives and umpire Therein softer pearlescente nature glows Glimmering patience, quit a long-sustained peso Their richness exceeds a poignancy reserved Keeping them bonded by familiar mantras The pew of morning, eddies love’s bonfire Singing into gentle memory, a treasure of church choirs Embellishing my heart, from sea to shore Intimately even within a solo each so preciously performs Therein voices peacefully time…impenetrable scents of sapphires Adrift upon that sea, spays the Shepard’s voice Oh, for the tides of their breath and voice Their clarity and homage dwells in large estates White sound seams through human heartstrings Keeping them bonded, flooding the stars with lifetime meanings Pleasant to the ear, their oncoming headlights draw me unthinkingly near The discovery of unmistakable cordials sincere Written with two very good friends/poets in mind. God bless you both always |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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I know if you have ever seen Blazing Saddles but your skill and words could have wrote. As I understand: You woke up with a blinding hangover Drank a cordial And worried about What you had done. Your words are brilliant Your expressions 'quietly taking the fun' Your expression even without consider the meaning is immortal. Yes I like your words; I like your complete lack of 'I can't take the mickey'. I liked your words. Dave |
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