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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-01-11 09:03 AM



the deluge of snow
buried deep in winters hold
his eyes stir my heart

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-01-11 09:32 AM


Michelle~
Very tenderly stirring~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-01-11 09:49 AM


inkedgoddess
Well I'd say the fire is still burning. LOL

Ravenwolfvoyager
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3 posted 2004-01-11 10:47 AM


What else should be said. It is enough to know that a hearts cavern thaws itself by the touch of spring through a warm hand. A wonderful write. Thank you.
choshi
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4 posted 2004-01-11 11:31 AM


the deluge of snow
buried deep in winters hold
his eyes stir my heart


~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

White swirling snowflakes,
fill the sky in silent dance.
Such pristine beauty-
soon blackened with ash and soot
in this passing, what remains?


inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-01-11 12:43 PM


thanks for reading and commenting and

choshi:

White swirling snowflakes,
fill the sky in silent dance.
Such pristine beauty-
soon blackened with ash and soot
in this passing, what remains?

for no apparent reason
amid the ash and soot
rainbows gather by my feet

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-01-11 12:57 PM


and I can imagine what your eyes do to him
garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-01-11 12:58 PM


Uh-huh, those eyes do it every time, don't they?
Hugs  
Ethel

Kahlil
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8 posted 2004-01-11 12:59 PM


oooh, I detect some melting...  ~K~
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2004-01-11 01:52 PM


What a beautifully articulated breeze Michelle. Love your work. TD
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