Open Poetry #30 |
Winter Weary..........haiku |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the deluge of snow buried deep in winters hold his eyes stir my heart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ Very tenderly stirring~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Well I'd say the fire is still burning. LOL |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
What else should be said. It is enough to know that a hearts cavern thaws itself by the touch of spring through a warm hand. A wonderful write. Thank you. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
the deluge of snow buried deep in winters hold his eyes stir my heart ~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~ White swirling snowflakes, fill the sky in silent dance. Such pristine beauty- soon blackened with ash and soot in this passing, what remains? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and commenting and choshi: White swirling snowflakes, fill the sky in silent dance. Such pristine beauty- soon blackened with ash and soot in this passing, what remains? for no apparent reason amid the ash and soot rainbows gather by my feet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I can imagine what your eyes do to him |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Uh-huh, those eyes do it every time, don't they? Hugs Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
oooh, I detect some melting... ~K~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a beautifully articulated breeze Michelle. Love your work. TD |
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