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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-01-11 06:13 AM


eenie meenie minie moe
which piggie won't let me grab hold?
eenie meenie minie my
that's the one that must be mine...

Oh pray tell, what can this be?
Chuckles does a magic act.
"quicker than the eye can see.."
eenie meenie minus fact.

A lady dances on the wire
the net removed accompanied
by the drama drums expire--
a fall is death of certainty.

eenie meenie minie moo--
cows jump happily the spoon.
eenie meenie midas me

"sleep is gold"

the poets...bleed...


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(and yes, I am an obsessive editor...)


[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (01-11-2004 07:02 AM).]

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ice
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1 posted 2004-01-11 07:15 AM


Jocular, yet serious...yes, we do bleed, words are the blood that's bled when the knife of insperation cuts...
enjoyed....
________ice
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inkedgoddess
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Ohio
2 posted 2004-01-11 07:41 AM


love the drama (mama)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-11 07:58 AM


Love this!
...and you lady!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-01-11 08:16 AM



Yes, we do,
and not only by
the letting
of words...


Duncan
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5 posted 2004-01-11 12:01 PM


"eenie meenie minie moe
which piggie won't let me grab hold?
eenie meenie minie my
that's the one that must be mine..."

Ain't it the truth????  

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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-01-11 12:08 PM


Karen, you are somethin' else gal !! You make my brains nervous...hee hee. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

Tim
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7 posted 2004-01-11 12:11 PM


and it's clear you weren't the one wee wee weeing all the way home...
intriguing view of your world you have, still reading...

Sadelite
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8 posted 2004-01-11 12:56 PM


A lady dances on the wire
the net removed accompanied
by the drama drums expire--
a fall is death of certainty.

Not to you Dear Lady-you'll live forever here with your creativity and rhyme!

I enjoyed this playful one.
              Sadie

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2004-01-11 01:23 PM


serenity  
And you have blown my tumbleweed into a speed exceed. LOL

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