Private Dance - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-09 03:43 PM

Private Dance

He is waiting to read this,
she knows he is….
like a private letter, between them….
he in her world, she in his…

and he makes her want to be his private dancer…

in remote chance
remoter still the dance
but still, for the romance
she takes that stance
he'll stand the chance

and they to take the private dance
that one that won't e'er be seen
he'll call upon her in midnight dream
she'll float to him on wings unseen

to hold, then be held
in grace, be graced
she to smile
into his face
he to grasp
her warm embrace

he to take her up by small of back
and she to feel his shift and tact
his essence she breathes in
her perfume, a transient sin

her dress of roses pink in glow
in sheerest silk her skin does show
and length of limb to hip to shoulder
keeps the room from getting colder

and he in turn, in turn of crest
has worn in dream his very best
her hand lies there upon his chest
in silent beat of love's caress

in silence he reads of this, her dream
in close of eyes, then it seems
she's come to him, again, in romance
to take up this, this private dance
she'll take the stance
he'll stand the chance

for this one, most private, dance

01.27.01

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

1 posted 2004-01-09 03:46 PM

and he in turn, in turn of crest
has worn in dream his very best
her hand lies there upon his chest
in silent beat of love's caress

This is a great statement.
I wish I had someone to fly to.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-09 03:47 PM

Most beautiful Karilea!
With just the right touch of mystery.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-01-09 04:31 PM

love the way you wrote this Karilea...

beautiful!

M

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-01-09 04:33 PM

yes... well done.I am sure the dance to be one rememebered.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-09 04:46 PM

Karilea~

'he'll call upon her in midnight dream
she'll float to him on wings unseen'

This likes me muchly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-01-09 05:06 PM

Kailea, Don't don this to me! How can I pick out specific lines to compliment when they are all blended together so beautifully.
This is one of my favorites of yours so far.

Sadie

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2004-01-09 06:21 PM

"his essence she breathes in
her perfume, a transient sin"

Excellent!

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

8 posted 2004-01-09 06:49 PM

Seems innocent enough (shucks written 3 years ago I can't harbor illusions) I enjoyed the soft ride.

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

9 posted 2004-01-09 07:47 PM

wow you can make a guy swoon with thoughts such as these

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-01-09 08:45 PM

ummmmm is your dance card full, if not write me in, I'll meet you in the next dream...:-)
enjoyed......
_______ice
><>

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2004-01-10 05:35 PM

This is a wonderful dream dance ...
Deeply enjoyed and saved in library.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

12 posted 2004-01-10 06:52 PM

Beautiful words embodying something incredibly special.

Dave

And dance the night in dreams
Splattered by emotion
Another day lost
A phone call for another lost appointment

In small room she asked would you want coffee

I'll make it he said

I dress she said, I need a shower first

He showered

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

13 posted 2004-01-10 07:06 PM

..Sunshine../\..very calming, your poems.beautiful..

../\..Spiros
----------------yea----

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2004-01-10 11:35 PM

thats the only way to dance,,,,,the feeling lingers,,,always,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-01-11 12:14 PM

This is definitely music to fantasize by! Loved it!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

16 posted 2004-01-11 12:56 PM

Very nice, enjoyed muchly.
kind of gets one in the dancing mood.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.