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ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-11 03:21 AM

Why am I plagued by these things,
strapped down by fears?
Quietly awaiting my wings,
allowing love to dry my tears.

I want so much to believe
every promise I am given.
Although I wait for him to leave,
I remain hidden within.

This armour he takes away
as he holds me in the dark,
Returns by the light of day,
weighing me down and leaving it's mark.

I yearn to shed this disguise,
revealing all that is me.
To a man who's seen nothing bu lies,
yet knows what I could be.

He sees the beauty inside
of a hardened and cracked soul.
A woman who's tried and tried
to climb from within the hole.

A hole created by an illusion
to which she has lost.
Does he hold the solution?
Or will there be a final cost?

"All we see or seem is but a dream within a dream" ~Poe

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-01-11 06:00 AM

"a man who's seen nothing bu lies,
yet knows what I could be."

I welcomed you before, but with those two lines? smile and wince, I embrace you.

good stuff

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-01-11 08:05 AM

Welcome to Passions. I hope your ventures here in the world of poetry will prove to be a balm.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-01-11 09:31 AM

AmbryaNell~
Welcome, Welcome, Welcome to Passions~

Lovely entrance from your heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-01-11 11:16 AM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions. We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

You will indeed fit in very nicely here…..

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-01-11 12:12 PM

A hole created by an illusion
to which she has lost.
Does he hold the solution?
Or will there be a final cost?

Fill in that hole with your own bright spirit, as only you can do.
Welcome to the Passions family.
Enjoy yourself here.
Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-01-11 12:50 PM

I yearn to shed this disguise,
revealing all that is me.
To a man who's seen nothing bu lies,
yet knows what I could be.

He sees the beauty inside
of a hardened and cracked soul.
A woman who's tried and tried
to climb from within the hole.

Awesome write! Much enjoyed. This is your FIRST POST? Great one! Welcome to Passions!
Sadelite

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-01-11 12:57 PM

He sees the beauty inside
of a hardened and cracked soul.
A woman who's tried and tried
to climb from within the hole.

Oh, this seems so real!! Excellent writing.
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I'm
going to enjoy reading you.

Hugs

Ethel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-01-11 01:03 PM

Welcome
Much energy and depth to your style.
ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-11 01:05 PM

awesome write! Love the rhyme scheme!

Welcome to Passions

Philmont
Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 61

10 posted 2004-01-11 06:38 PM

Hey I like your poem. You made a few spelling mistakes, like the bu thing, but I know you prolly didn't intend to spell it that way

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Your images are really intriguing. The armour that comes off by night and is redonned by day is really neat. The theological content is well worked out too.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-01-12 11:01 AM

(big angel hugs) You have a heart that is deserving of the most genuine and true love and you will find that special man who will love you from the inside emotionally, spiritually, and physically, this is a most gorgeous debut, wishing you the greatest happiness, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ambrya Nell, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ambrya Nell, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ambrya_nell
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 28
Ohio

12 posted 2004-01-12 02:41 PM

thank you all so much for your wonderful compliments.. I truly appreciate them. It's so nice to know that what comes from my heart is accepted and enjoyed.
Nice to meet you all.
I look forward to reading all of your poems and getting to know you all.
Thanx again.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2004-01-13 12:07 PM

He does, sweet one. The light is on. Beautifully written and inspired poem. Welcome to Pip.

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