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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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 Orange do you see me I am there the lone boat in row paddling ever so steadily into you and there you are orange the point of the spell when day ends bringing forth the easy birth of night the magic time of fire finger painting all you touch in the glow of warmth orange is a feather soft rendering caress with it’s perfect cover and with each stir of water breaking surface I pull closer as you blanket my world now hue my skin flow through pores tint my soul with this pigment so I too become orange |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was gloriously romantic -- orange is such a happy color! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Helen, a beautiful color...hope you are feeling better sis  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
do you see me I am there the lone boat in row paddling ever so steadily into you and there you are orange the point of the spell when day ends bringing forth the easy birth of night the magic time of fire finger painting all you touch in the glow of warmth orange is a feather soft rendering caress with it’s perfect cover and with each stir of water breaking surface I pull closer as you blanket my world now hue my skin flow through pores tint my soul with this pigment so I too become orange I confess, you had me at "hello"--the pic is stunning, but your vision in the vision is goosebump-worthy. This is scathingly lovely Helen. (my number is the same too, should you need a listening ear, I'm here. If you need a shoulder, I'd love to return the favor--you've been a kind soul to me. Be well soon. ) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ Your photo, STUNNING ... your poetic thoughts as beautiful as they come~ Hope you are feeling much, much better dearest friend~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice, enjoyed the read much. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
the easy birth of night the magic time of fire finger painting all you touch in the glow of warmth Helen, this is beautiful. I have missed your words and hope you are feeling better. hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey Slicky! May your writing never be interrupted. I hope health is finding its way to you. Now: can you find me a word to rhyme with "orange"???  Heart Hugs, -MVS You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nice pic, slick! Was that last Friday? Sunset was much like that here too. Beautiful! And I understand this orange you speak. I do I do e good to see you here, h [[[hugs]]] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hi all...and thank you for the warm thoughts..i am somewhat better...i had the MRI done...and go back to the dr on fri...more test to be done on feb 2nd...with the results on feb 9th. thank you again for all your prayers thoughts and warm wishes...no one loves you like i do. i do miss you. oh and ps the pic is beautiful isn't it? i would love to take the credit for it...but as i have been unable to see the sunset it was taken and given as a gift to me...a sweet inspiration by a sweet person |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Helen,.... May you absorb some of that healing warm orange color and get feeling better very soon. ~Healing Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"bringing forth the easy birth of night the magic time of fire" Oh, YES! |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this poem was soooo good!!! i luv orange too and the picture was soo pretty! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
so I too become orange lovely,and so romantic. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I am holding you in my prayers. BEEEEEwell. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Poem and picture are both absolutely beautiful... You've been greatly missed. *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I read this minutes after you posted it, but of course I would wait a while to comment, wouldn't I?....this is everything a poem should be, and more. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Stunning! either together or alone...~C |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is a beautiful write and pic.... You OK? had no idea you were ill... Feel free to email me here at work K? Connie |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Did someone say goosebumps? You never fail in giving me those. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Wow... I got them too reading this, this is beautiful, I read this again and again, such a warm feeling it gives you just reading it. Wonderful! Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! (does happy orange dance) Orange is one of the happiest colors to me, as both oranges and tangerines taste sweet and they are orange, happy color, yay, God Bless You, this is so romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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