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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-20 09:43 AM



The space between
each raindrop…
The pause at the top of
your breath…
The silence that separates
every musical note…

Is filled with
the vibrancy of life…
Is steeped in the
essence of wholeness…

Is the refrain of sanity
That says,
“It all makes sense.”

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-12-20 10:55 AM


Jc...this is simply beautiful and soul expanding. Perhaps my favorite...of all my favorites!


Love,
Eric

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
2 posted 2003-12-20 11:24 AM


Smile

Do you know when everythingelse makes a pause, thats where we start to think.

I loved this its great, simply great. tells alot.

Smile

Jes


SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-12-20 01:44 PM


) Nice........

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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Belgium
4 posted 2003-12-20 01:48 PM


Thank you for for making me smile

Hugs, kelly

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-12-20 01:53 PM


this is awesome jc...just awesome!

I've never thought of it that way, but I'm glad I read this.

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
6 posted 2003-12-20 11:35 PM


Wow, everyone!  Thanks for your comments...I'm so pleased you liked this! Eric, Jes, Shara, Kelly, and Dixie...it is always such a treat to get such gracious replies. You've made my day!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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7 posted 2004-01-18 08:47 PM


This was brilliant!
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
8 posted 2004-01-18 08:53 PM


Oh my goodness, iliana...

What a nice comment...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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