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Weather Report |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
The weather as a topic for the unsure proceeds, modifies the landscape pure it may have caused a weathered stone a worn ravine sculpted by a river's cone or the drift of wind to push a system out and an upcurrent of air to feed a spout... the weather is a topic for the human kind a way to spot which entity has a variable mind relaxes the straw chewer on wooden rockers tips sport heroes at changing room lockers that there's something else left to be said I feel that some discourses need to be fed whether it's a bitter cold spell what else is there left to tell?... with an immediate phrase of what must be said weather talk is a clever decoy, subtler images are read whether it be a fine weather forecast a mild dry air system that lasts... the first line goes "nice day, isn't it?" as listener's ears ache for another tid bit.... |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
This was most enjoyable ^_^. It captures the everyday motion through weather.. Our social standards and stuff. I really liked this ^_^. thanks for posting. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Clever indeed! Enjoyed, muchos gracias! |
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