Open Poetry #30 |
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Parting Tokens . . . . . . tanka |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Parting Tokens One lock of your hair, a tiny wisp of perfume, your voice within me... could any man own riches enough to buy such treasure? [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-26-2003 06:35 PM).] |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
James, Excellent! powerful in a few words Margot |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poignant, Sir, very poignant! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful work, Jamie... money in the bank can never buy such treasures... only a loving heart can appreciate what wealth he has in them. *S* |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
I do so love Tanka's may have to post one soon & I loved this one ![]() I am sorta new here and I just posted one too Would love for you drop by and see me also Blessings Susan~~~` |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamies These kinds of treasure are given with love, no purchased gift could mean as much. It is a man with a tender heart that knows this. |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
pricelessly beautiful many blessings Eno Words are my medicine. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jamie~ THIS IS A TREASURE~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
priceless! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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